My Wife Is a Genius

I've been stuck over this one section of the Predator novel for the last two weeks, totally unable to figure out what to do. So Ann reads it tonight and says, in essence, "That explosion happens right here, not there. This happens here, not here. And he doesn't wake up in the morning and that happens--it happens right after this conversation."So simple, and yet it completely energizes the first part of the novel. So, thanks, Ann. You're a genius. I was about to throw myself off a cliff over this...Jeff