Chris Reilly and Tara Billinger's "Adora and the Electric Elephant"

My friend Chris Reilly has been writing/working on Adora and the Electric Elephant, a new comic illustrated by Tara Billinger, for Slave Labor Comics. He's also responsible for Punch & Judy: A Grand Guignol and The Trouble with Igor, among others. Chris asked if I'd help edit two pages of actual story in Adora and the Electric Elephant, and is being kind enough to give me a credit in the book. I didn't do that much with it--mostly revised the first couple of paras--but now it gives me an excuse to share those finished pages, along with a general sample page from the comic.